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0 楼 发表于  2007/1/30 4:55:54    编 辑   




                                                                                 
                                                                                 
         No.6                                                                    
                                                                                 
(李和江的小屋,江躺在床上,伤已经基本痊愈,大姐进)                              
                                                                                 
江:大姐,别忙了,坐会吧,                                                       
                                                                                 
大姐:好啊!陪我的小妹妹聊天。                                                   
                                                                                 
江:这两天累坏你了,                                                             
                                                                                 
大姐:老那么客气干什么啊?我是你大姐,你父母不能来,只有我能照顾你               
                                                                                 
江:都是那个该死的李瀚海!                                                       
                                                                                 
大姐:你也别太在意了,那天我和那个小女生聊了一会儿,她和瀚海之间真的             
                                                                                 
  没什么事,只是兄妹而已。                                                       
                                                                                 
江:可他也太... ...                                                              
                                                                                 
大姐:太什么了?他对你真的很在意的,这两天看到他,一点精神都没有,象             
                                                                                 
  没了魂似的,一个劲儿的和我说,是他的错,他的错。你就放了他吧。                 
                                                                                 
江:可是... ...                                                                  
                                                                                 
(李推门进,手里提着一个塑料袋)                                                 
                                                                                 
大姐:唉呦,妹夫回来了,我的任务完成,雪映还给你了。                             
                                                                                 
李(脸红):大姐这两天多亏你了。                                                 
                                                                                 
大姐:两口子,一个样,客气什么啊,以后好点对雪映就行了,我先走了,               
                                                                                 
   你们的事情,你们自己谈(笑,下)                                              
                                                                                 
沉默,李先开口,把手里的东西递给江。                                             
                                                                                 
李:给你,沙其玛                                                                 
                                                                                 
江(惊喜):你怎么知道我喜欢吃的。                                               
                                                                                 
李:猜的(笑),我问了你们寝室那几个人,过去是我不好,不关心你,还               
                                                                                 
  生我气么?                                                                     
                                                                                 
江(佯怒):生!                                                                 
                                                                                 
李(吓到,急道):我和夏荷真的只是兄妹啊!                                       
                                                                                 
江(笑):不是这个啦!                                                           
                                                                                 
李:(疑惑)那是什么?                                                           
                                                                                 
江(微嗔)你上次带我去麦当劳都是什么时候了?见了一个小妹妹就头昏眼花,           
                                                                                 
   就请人家去麦当劳,怎么不想想我?                                              
                                                                                 
李(如释重负):噢,这样啊,正好我这有笔稿费,等你全好了,我们去麦当劳。         
                                                                                 
江(点李的头):这才乖么!对了,这次你的稿费怎么没那去请肥肥他们?               
                                                                                 
李:老婆大人有令,怎敢不听啊。                                                   
                                                                                 
江:(嗔怒):坏,谁是你老婆了,不理你了,我吃东西。(开始剥包装纸,             
                                                                                 
由于手上还有纱布,不是很灵活)                                                   
                                                                                 
李(握住江的手):你放下,我来(小心的剥开,喂到江的嘴边)                       
                                                                                 
江感动,眼睛里有泪转,抱住李                                                     
                                                                                 
李(伏在江耳边,小声):以后不许再说那些话了。                                   
                                                                                 
江(含泪,点头):恩!                                                           
                                                                                 
场景二十结束                                                                     
                                                                                 
(男生宿舍,三台电脑在联机,zerg和yes,sir的声音此起彼伏,旁边有不少人           
                                                                                 
在观战,肥疾进)                                                                 
                                                                                 
肥:收摊,班主任来啦!                                                           
                                                                                 
(众人手忙脚乱的收摊,不过老师以进,为一四十多岁的中年人,看起来很精神)         
                                                                                 
师:行了,我知道你们在干什么。                                                   
                                                                                 
众人陪笑                                                                         
                                                                                 
师:现在你们也大了,我也不说什么了,好坏你们自己以后会知道的。                   
                                                                                 
  不过马上要考试了,都拆了吧,唉呦,常明,你这太机器配置不错吗                   
                                                                                 
   纯平的显示器,就用来打星际,你不觉得浪费么?                                  
                                                                                 
常(张嘴想说话,被肥拉住)                                                       
                                                                                 
师:起码也要来打diablo啊                                                         
                                                                                 
众人笑                                                                           
                                                                                 
师:我告诉你们啊,带你们实验的那个研究生,是科大帝国的no.1。可是人家             
                                                                                 
  学习也做的不错,是保研上来的,你们打游戏我不反对,只是别忘了学习。             
                                                                                 
  知道么?听我的话,马上拆!                                                     
                                                                                 
众人:恩!                                                                       
                                                                                 
手忙脚乱的拆机器                                                                 
                                                                                 
肥:我怎么就没看出来呢?                                                         
                                                                                 
常:要不,我们哪天找他挑一把?                                                   
                                                                                 
肥:得了吧,你,等考试完再说吧。                                                 
                                                                                 
场景二十一结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
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楼主 发表于  2007/1/30 10:44:19    编 辑   

                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                  No.7                                                           
                                                                                 
(实验室)                                                                       
                                                                                 
肥:你们那个圈子又赢了。                                                         
                                                                                 
李:什么圈子不圈子的,这个版主本来就是我的。                                     
                                                                                 
肥:行了吧,你。当了版主开始烧火吧。                                             
                                                                                 
李:还能烧什么火,唱歌呗。                                                       
                                                                                 
肥:唱歌?你行么?就你那水平,也就够冲凉的时候吼两嗓子,还得吓到几个。           
                                                                                 
李:有那么次么,再说,谁说我一定要唱了。                                         
                                                                                 
肥:你是版主诶,你不唱谁唱啊。                                                   
                                                                                 
李:到时候再说吧。                                                               
                                                                                 
(场景二十二结束)                                                               
                                                                                 
(一间卡拉OK厅,大概有三十个人,明显的分成了几个圈子,李和肥肥坐在一起,         
                                                                                 
同桌的还有一对男女,是他的版副和版副娘子)                                       
                                                                                 
版副:诶,怎么版主夫人没来?                                                     
                                                                                 
李:她和同学出去逛街了,不来了。                                                 
                                                                                 
娘子:听说夫人一副好嗓子,可惜今天不能听到,损失啊,损失。                       
                                                                                 
李笑,屏幕打出,版副和版副娘子的对唱歌曲,两人上。李掏出烟来。                   
                                                                                 
肥:不是戒了么,怎么又拿出来了。                                                 
                                                                                 
李:她今天又不来。                                                               
                                                                                 
肥:这不好吧。                                                                   
                                                                                 
李:有什么不好的,只要你不乱说就行了,我问你啊,她给了你多少好处,让你           
                                                                                 
   监视我。                                                                      
                                                                                 
肥:怯,怎么说话呢。明显的损我是不是。                                           
                                                                                 
李(笑):开玩笑的,别认真啊。你也来一根吧。                                     
                                                                                 
肥接过来,两人点烟,这时,李的BP机响,李起身去回电话。少倾回来,脸色发           
                                                                                 
急。                                                                             
                                                                                 
肥:谁啊?出什么事了?                                                           
                                                                                 
李:她要来。                                                                     
                                                                                 
肥:谁要来啊。                                                                   
                                                                                 
李:还能有谁。                                                                   
                                                                                 
肥:你小妹妹?                                                                   
                                                                                 
李:什么啊,雪映!                                                               
                                                                                 
肥:来就来呗,正好,这有多少人要听她唱呢。                                       
                                                                                 
李:什么啊。她鼻子那么灵,闻到我身上的烟味,又要和我吵了。                       
                                                                                 
肥(幸灾乐祸):刚才跟你讲,你不听,这回好了吧,不听老人言吃亏在眼前啊!         
                                                                                 
李:行了,行了。你对,你对,赶快给我找东西。                                     
                                                                                 
肥肥和李四处找口香糖,李把几块口香糖一起放到嘴里嚼。                             
                                                                                 
李(对肥呵气):我嘴里还有烟味么?                                               
                                                                                 
肥(颇仔细的嗅):没了。                                                         
                                                                                 
李(如释重负):那就好,那就好。                                                 
                                                                                 
肥:不行!你身上肯定还有味,                                                     
                                                                                 
李:那怎么办?                                                                   
                                                                                 
肥:没办法,除非你回去换衣服!                                                   
                                                                                 
李:回去换衣服?外面雨下的跟什么似的,你叫我回去换衣服?再说也来不及啊,         
                                                                                 
   她马上就到了!                                                                
                                                                                 
肥:外面雨下的多大?                                                             
                                                                                 
李:不小!                                                                       
                                                                                 
肥:正好!                                                                       
                                                                                 
李:什么正好。                                                                   
                                                                                 
肥:反正你体格好,没关系的。                                                     
                                                                                 
李:你在那说什么呢?我怎么一点都听不懂啊!                                       
                                                                                 
肥:你啊。上外面转两圈,淋一淋,身上就没味了!                                   
                                                                                 
李:真的假的啊?!                                                               
                                                                                 
肥:什么真的假的,你不信算了。到时候,别说我不帮你。                             
                                                                                 
李:好吧,诶(转身出门)                                                         
                                                                                 
片刻,李回,肥看着他笑,递给他毛巾擦。两人坐下,没一会儿,江带着大姐进。         
                                                                                 
坐到李身边。                                                                     
                                                                                 
江:你身上怎么这么湿啊。                                                         
                                                                                 
李:来的时候没带雨伞,你不是出去逛街的么?                                       
                                                                                 
大姐:新郎官,哦,新官上任,怎么能不捧场呢?(笑)                               
                                                                                 
江:大姐,你又乱说。                                                             
                                                                                 
李和肥赔笑,李把点歌单递给两个女生。版副和版副娘子唱完落坐。打招呼。寒           
                                                                                 
暄。                                                                             
                                                                                 
江:翰海,我们一起唱一个吧。                                                     
                                                                                 
李:我唱歌,你还不知道么,算了吧。                                               
                                                                                 
江:就唱一个么,难道你还坐这听一晚啊!                                           
                                                                                 
李:算了吧,算了吧                                                               
                                                                                 
江:不嘛。(拉住李的胳膊来回晃,突然鼻子一动)你又抽烟了??                     
                                                                                 
李(惊慌):没啊!                                                               
                                                                                 
江:没有?我闻闻(贴近李),没有什么?                                           
                                                                                 
李(看着肥肥,肥肥一脸无辜,转过去看别人唱歌)                                   
                                                                                 
江:你,又骗我?!                                                               
                                                                                 
李:... ...                                                                      
                                                                                 
大姐(圆场,推江):该你了,该你了                                               
                                                                                 
江盯着李,李不敢和她对视,江转身上台,屏幕上显现的是《走向红毯那一天》           
                                                                                 
前奏,江的歌声开始。很不错的声音                                                 
                                                                                 
场景二十三在歌声中结束                                                           
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
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2 楼 发表于  2007/1/31 5:25:35    编 辑   

                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                    No.8                                                         
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
李独白:这次雪映没和我吵,我们两个都很清楚,这份感情已经出现了太多的裂           
                                                                                 
缝,分手是迟早的问题。只是什么时候,欠缺一个合乎条件的导火索,我们之间           
                                                                                 
似乎达成了一个默契,手挽手,一起走向雷区。但在此之前,我们还是会小心的           
                                                                                 
捧着这份感情并且挥霍。我们相敬如宾,甜蜜的就象我们在刚开始在一起的时候。         
                                                                                 
这种日子过的很累,有时候我甚至想早点结束,但是,就这么完了么?                   
                                                                                 
(桃李苑)                                                                       
                                                                                 
李:今晚,我们去化院的舞会吧。                                                   
                                                                                 
江:唉呦,难得你这么有兴致啊。                                                   
                                                                                 
李:你还记不记得,那次我们一起去选国标,你选上了,我被涮下来。                   
                                                                                 
江(笑):后来我跟大姐磨了好几天,她才答应做你的舞伴。                           
                                                                                 
李:后来,她不是也很喜欢跳舞了么                                                 
                                                                                 
江:是啊,舞痴一个。                                                             
                                                                                 
场景二十四结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(东苑,场地空旷,已经做好了舞会的准备,化装舞会,门口有几个人在发简单的         
                                                                                 
面具,人不是很多,还没开场,江挽着李落座,夏荷面具翻在头上,急走过来)           
                                                                                 
夏:哥,帮个忙!                                                                 
                                                                                 
李:小妹妹?(转头看江,江躲在面具后面)                                         
                                                                                 
夏:没人下场,你带个头,这是嫂子吧,嫂子好!                                     
                                                                                 
李:雪映,这是我常和你说的夏荷。                                                 
                                                                                 
江(淡淡的):你好。                                                             
                                                                                 
李:我们下场吧(拉起江的手)                                                     
                                                                                 
两个人的配合相当默契,不时的有一些花式,空旷的“舞池”给了他们施展的空           
                                                                                 
间,四周的人并不急于下场,饶有兴致的欣赏,不时的报以热烈的掌声,直到一           
                                                                                 
曲终了。在掌声中两人拉手,谢场。                                                 
                                                                                 
场景二十五结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(出租车里,李送江去火车站,路过胜利广场,灯火闪烁,江叫停车,拉着李下           
                                                                                 
车,李不明白用意,疑惑的看着江,江不讲话,拉着李跑进广场。来到水道旁)           
                                                                                 
江(指着旋梯):背我过去。                                                       
                                                                                 
李(看看江,蹲下身去):来。                                                     
                                                                                 
江趴在李背上,闭上眼,李小心的跨过一道道的水道,到旋梯旁。                       
                                                                                 
李:雪映,到了。                                                                 
                                                                                 
江(睁开眼睛):好快啊!                                                         
                                                                                 
江从李身上滑下,拉着李的手,一路跑上旋梯,转过半圆,跳上临街的那一端,           
                                                                                 
扳过李的身子,看着李的眼睛,并不说话,突然扳下李的头,噙上李的嘴唇               
                                                                                 
两个人在临空的建筑上真情流露,建筑的下面聚集了很多的出租车,三轮车,             
                                                                                 
有几个人发现了这对人,哄笑,吹口哨,一辆车,率先开始鸣笛,一时间十几辆           
                                                                                 
车的声音响彻夜空,江和李分开,看着下面,笑)                                     
                                                                                 
场景二十六结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(火车厢内,江坐在李怀里,广播声起,李和江对视,李吻下去,转身下车,并           
                                                                                 
不回头,车厢外。李和江隔窗对视,车启动,李随车跑,知道火车离站)                 
                                                                                 
场景二十七结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
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3 楼 发表于  2007/1/31 15:31:30    编 辑   

                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                    No.9                                                         
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
(寝室,电脑桌上,两三个啤酒罐,烟灰缸里塞满了烟头,背景音乐很吵——莫           
                                                                                 
文蔚《盛夏的果实》,李和江约好的上网的日子,以下为聊天记录)                     
                                                                                 
江:还好么?                                                                     
                                                                                 
李:还好吧。                                                                     
                                                                                 
江:我们分手吧,                                                                 
                                                                                 
李:恩                                                                           
                                                                                 
江:你没什么说的么?                                                             
                                                                                 
李:没有吧。                                                                     
                                                                                 
江:那,我们以后?                                                               
                                                                                 
李:好朋友?                                                                     
                                                                                 
江:恩!                                                                         
                                                                                 
李:这次回来,我还去接你吧。                                                     
                                                                                 
江:好啊,:)                                                                   
                                                                                 
场景二十八结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(暑假将要结束的科大,李一个人在傍晚校园里逛,沙滩裤,印花T_shirt,拖            
                                                                                 
鞋,手里拿着一块西瓜在啃,身边不时经过军训队伍,突然有人从后面拍他的肩           
                                                                                 
膀,李转身,一身军训服的夏荷,李开始没认出来,仔细的看)                         
                                                                                 
夏(笑):哥,是我啊,这么早回来啊,嫂子呢?                                     
                                                                                 
李:分开了                                                                       
                                                                                 
夏:哦,对不起                                                                   
                                                                                 
李:没什么,军训挺累的吧,                                                       
                                                                                 
夏:还好啦,明天放假,我请你吃饭。                                               
                                                                                 
李:怎么突然想起请我吃饭啊                                                       
                                                                                 
夏:我生日啊                                                                     
                                                                                 
李:那该我请你                                                                   
                                                                                 
夏:本来打算要你请的,但是看在你刚失恋的份上,就我请吧,听说有家东北             
                                                                                 
菜不错的。                                                                       
                                                                                 
李(苦笑):那好吧。                                                             
                                                                                 
夏:那好,明天晚上六点,在我们楼下等我。                                         
                                                                                 
李:好                                                                           
                                                                                 
场景二十九结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(320楼下,李徘徊,抽烟,夏蹦蹦跳跳的下楼,手里拎这半串葡萄,看见李抽            
                                                                                 
烟,皱眉)                                                                       
                                                                                 
夏:把烟给我                                                                     
                                                                                 
李:恩?                                                                         
                                                                                 
夏:不要在女生面前抽烟,这是礼貌,也是起码的□□公德。                           
                                                                                 
李:好(把烟给夏)                                                               
                                                                                 
夏小心的弹掉了火,把熄灭的烟还给李                                               
                                                                                 
夏:我用葡萄和你换                                                               
                                                                                 
李笑,接过葡萄,                                                                 
                                                                                 
场景三十结束                                                                     
                                                                                 
餐厅,几道东北菜,两瓶哈尔滨啤酒,两个人谈的很高兴                               
                                                                                 
夏:哥,我也选你们那个系                                                         
                                                                                 
李:真的假的啊?                                                                 
                                                                                 
夏:当然真的                                                                     
                                                                                 
李:好啊,好啊,欢迎                                                             
                                                                                 
场景三十一结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
(当天晚上,科大,两个人散步)                                                   
                                                                                 
李:还早呢,你要去上自习么?                                                     
                                                                                 
夏:什么啊,这两天本来就累的够戗,那有心思上自习啊                               
                                                                                 
李:那,那我们去看碟?                                                           
                                                                                 
夏:好啊,看什么片子?                                                           
                                                                                 
李:最终幻想                                                                     
                                                                                 
场景三十二结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
东区图书馆音像资料室,最终幻想结局,很凄美的画面,夏下意识的找李的手             
                                                                                 
李犹豫了一下,两个人的手紧握在一起                                               
                                                                                 
场景三十三结束                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
两年以后,机场,江准备登机,不时的四处看。象在什么人。李进                       
                                                                                 
已经工作一年,明显的很成熟,江惊喜。随后李身后又进一个人——                     
                                                                                 
夏荷,江的脸色顿时转变。夏并不向前。李到江身边。                                 
                                                                                 
李:保重吧                                                                       
                                                                                 
江:恩                                                                           
                                                                                 
李:还回来么                                                                     
                                                                                 
江:也许吧。                                                                     
                                                                                 
李:最好回来吧                                                                   
                                                                                 
江:到时候再说吧,                                                               
                                                                                 
广播起,要乘客登机,江转身,但突然转身,抱住李痛哭,                             
                                                                                 
李(抚摩着她的头发):好了,好了,该走了                                         
                                                                                 
江泪眼看李,转身走,夏上前。一起目送飞机起飞。                                   
                                                                                 
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